A (very) short little excerpt from my NaNo Novel. For the most part it is unedited and made of fail. This particular scene is set during SG1 Season 9 episode "Origin."

( The first time Ayiana hears the word 'Ori', a shiver meanders its way down her spine and she resists the urge to recoil in disgust. )

So, is it good? Bad? Does it make you want to read more or run away screaming in the other direction?